Thursday, March 1, 2012

"naked lunch" thesis statement


 

Shifting from potential dominance to complete submission in "Naked Lunch", Michael Hollinger utilizes extended metaphor, detailed characterization, and sarcastic irony to convey the seriousness behind the domestic violence that can occur in relationships.

2 comments:

  1. I like your intro phrase and the devices you picked as well. There isn't anything missing from it and I don't see any mistakes. Good job!

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  2. Hi Ashe. Ketchum. Elle oh Elle. I like your shift, it got me thinking. I suggest changing "utilizes", which is over used, I feel, and changing "covey" to "highlight" or "emphasize". yuh did gud.

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